Micro Fiction: Never Mind

Picture from an old scrapbook of sketches & poetry

“Do you love me?”
She raised her head and found his deep brown eyes boring into hers. The corners of her lips quivered. All the turbulent emotions she’d felt through the last six months, how was she supposed to fit them into a ‘yes’ or ‘no’ answer. There were just so many things she wanted to tell him.
They had been lovers once, but they fell apart. She had tried her best and now they were friends. She smiled, wondering how to gently tell him every single thought running through her head. She didn’t want to lose him.
“Never mind”

16 comments:

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    1. Hi Diptee :)

      Thanks! ^_^ I tend to get wordy, micro fiction is helping me write to the point :P

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    2. I thought Diptee di was about my age for some reason back then :P

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  2. You write well....very good....and don't tell me you have drawn that sketch? It's a masterpiece

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    1. Hi Ritesh :)

      Thanks. This was the first micro fiction I've ever written...and yes, I made the sketch :P The topic was to find an old sketch, get nostalgic and write a 100 words! Glad you liked it.^_^

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  3. Seriously, i would pay money for getting that sketch....they look so cute....the eyes :O

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    1. Thank you :) You can use it. As long as you give me credit :)

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  4. I wasn't intending to use it for any blog....like i just liked it...thanks anyways

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    1. ha ha ha, thank you :)) Check back to my blog tomorrow...working on a post which might really interest you ^_^

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  5. Okay, I am subscribing to your blog through email. That way, I shall get notified.

    Sorry, I am keeping you awake. You may sleep now

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  6. Sweetypie.. Relax. Muah..
    But yes, that was beautiful. :')

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